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Jada Poe's avatar

Looking forward to reading more chapters!

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svndavn's avatar

This made my day ♥️

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Kriziabel Knightfall's avatar

The beginning was so gripping! Love the cliffhanger ✨✨

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svndavn's avatar

This made my day! Thank you 💜

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Allie Bock's avatar

What a great beginning and cliffhanger!

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svndavn's avatar

Thank you!

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Terra Kelly's avatar

Ohhh, you made me curious. I look forward to more!🥰

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svndavn's avatar

This made my day! Thank you ☺️

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Tabitha's avatar

Wow, this is beautiful. I subscribed; I want to read on.

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svndavn's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m so happy you enjoyed it ☺️

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Elizabeth Mondok's avatar

Great beginning! I'm hooked! I love the juxtaposition between her old life and new, and how José is the voice of reason!

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svndavn's avatar

Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this beginning 😊

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